雅思写作

9.25雅思作文解析:坚持一份工作更容易满足

环球教育

2021-09-27

观点类大作文,工作类话题

People who decide on a career path early in their lives and keep to it are more likely to have a satisfying working life than those who change jobs frequently. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

题目来源:2021年9月25日大陆雅思大作文(重复17年4月22日亚太考题)

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题目大意

早日选定并恪守职业目标比频繁改行的人更容易对事业感到满足。同意反对?

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思路解析

这是一道观点类大作文。讨论的是单一事业是否比频繁改行更能获得事业满足。如果同意观点,可以强调坚持一份职业目标带来的好处。如果反对观点,则可以指出题目没有给出任何前提,在没有仔细考虑具体前提而随便下定义是不合理的,对于不同人来说,能带来工作满足感的因素是不一样的。

首先,我们要明确人的工作满足感可能来自于哪些因素。月半鸭认为主要有四方面,工资收入、工作成就感、未来发展和稳定性,然后我们来看下具体观点。

我们先来看坚持一份工作所能带来的好处,主要有两方面。

一是能够早日选定并坚持一个职业目标的人,很多都是基于自己感兴趣的方向或是认为有发展前景的范围,因此在工作时他们会有更大的热情,以及更容易在完成任务时获得精神上的满足感。

二是坚持做一个职业,能够积累更多的行业经验、人脉关系等,在不断工作中也能够熟练掌握并提升自己的技能,相较于频繁换工作的人来说,能更容易开展工作并获得成就。同时,丰富的经验和工龄也更容易让其在公司中获得晋升,进而提高其收入,提升物质上的满足感。

然后我们再来看,如果反对角度切入的话,那可以讨论对于不同的人来说,因为导致满足感的因素不同,所以做的选择也会不同,并不是单纯由于坚持一份工作或是频繁换工作带来的。

比如,对于追求物质满足的人,会更看重工资报酬。他们为了让自己或家人过上更好的生活,需要足够的收入来维持。对于追求精神满足的人,他们可能会更看重完成工作时产生的成就感,这会让他们更加愉悦。追求物质满足的人如果遇到一份能给出足够工资和升职空间的工作,自然坚持做下去也能获得满足感,反之则可能换工作寻求更好的机会。

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提纲

雅思写作

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范文示例

It is true that some people know from an early age what career they want to pursue, and they are happy to spend the rest of their lives in the same profession. While I accept that this may suit many people, I believe that others enjoy changing careers or seeking job satisfaction in different ways.

On the one hand, having a defined career path can certainly lead to a satisfying working life. First of all, settling down in only one career is extremely beneficial to building up critical working experiences, and quickly becoming an expert in the field. It is literally impossible to succeed without being patient with the chosen path. To take Steve Jobs and Bill Gates as examples, when they were children, they had an intense passion for computer, then in their whole lives Steve and Bill just pursued that passion. The result, as we have all seen, was the birth of two leading technology corporations Apple and Microsoft. Besides, experiences in the job do help get promotion along with higher salary. Employers view loyal staff as a long-term investment, so promoting these staff within the company might serve their best interests. This is because long-serving employees know company's policies throughout, have a good relationship with co-workers, and understand clients' needs.

On the other hand, people find happiness in their working lives in different ways. Firstly, not everyone dreams of doing a particular job, and it can be equally rewarding to try a variety of professions; starting out on a completely new career path can be a reinvigorating experience. Secondly, some people see their jobs as simply a means of earning money, and they are happy if their salary is high enough to allow them to enjoy life outside work. Finally, job satisfaction is often the result of working conditions, rather than the career itself. For example, a positive working atmosphere, enthusiastic colleagues, and an inspirational boss can make working life much more satisfying, regardless of the profession.

In conclusion, it can certainly be satisfying to pursue a particular career for the whole of one's life, but this is by no means the only route to fulfillment.

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相关词汇和语法结构

defined 明确的

intense 强烈的

get promotion 获得晋升

rewarding 值得的

reinvigorating 奋发的

enthusiastic 热情的

colleagues 同事

inspirational 鼓舞人心的

regardless of 不管;不考虑

fulfillment 满足

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