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2020-09-18现在很多考生的写作分数是6分左右,这算是一个中等的水平。如此雅思作文是的大作文与小作文有什么共同点呢?今天要给考生们介绍的是大小雅思作文有什么共同点。
大小雅思作文有什么共同点?分析如下:
1. 基本可以完成任务又或是呼应任务,还会有一些小遗漏,但对整体没有妨碍;
2. 用词大多数准确,有一些时候用词可以显得跳一下,用出一点让人眼前一亮的表达;
3. 基本上或者只有很少(2到3个以内)的语法错误;
4. 可以熟练切换简单句与复合句及复杂句;
5. 连接手段看上去丰富,但时不时会有不到点子又或者使用得比较呆板的情况;
6. 不管大小作文规划结构时都有整体逻辑,一段说一事,聚焦了本段关键而不会乱发散;
7. 段落中间的表达逻辑必须清晰,能够更好的呼应题目要求(如小作文比较讲究抓特征与趋势多进行对比,大作文讲究呼应题目的讨论范围与细节以及写作要求)。
作文实例:
The pie chart below shows the main reasons why students chose to study at a particular UK university in 1987 and in 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The chart demonstrates the primary reasons why students chose to study at a specific UK university in 1987 and in 2017.
Much more students who chose a particular university of UK because it was close to their parental home in 2007 than in 1987 the advantage of good sports and social activities for a university seemed become less competitive than before. It was projected that the university will focus on local students.
The number of students who chose a university based on the suitable degree courses remained a high percentage and met a gentle rise (from 35% to 37%). Similar situation happened in the aspect of those who chose university based on the quality of teaching, which went up from 15% to 18%.
Surprisingly,the reason of good sports and activities dropped conspicuously by 13%(from 19% to 6%). Decrease also happened at the part of good sports and social realities by 4%.
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