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2020-01-13本文分享了雅思7分作文写作方法的信息,文中内容只是让大家当作参考学习,期望会对考生们提升写作成绩有一定的帮助。
雅思7分作文写作方法分享如下:
Task response
(一) 具体要求
Task response 表示任务的完成。
在官方给出的评分标准里7分的要求是这样的:
1. Address all parts of the task,
2. Present a clear position throughout the response,
3. Present, extend and support main ideas, but there may be a tendency to over-generalize and/or supporting ideas may lack focus。
① 回答了题目要求的所有问题。
② 整篇文章观点鲜明。
③ 详细的解释和论证了观点。
(二) 范例评析
▲ 剑桥 全真试题7 Test2 Task2
Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others,however,argue that the circumstances of an individual crime,and the motivation for committing it,should be taken into account when deciding the punishment。
Discuss both views and give your own opinion。
1. 考生必须要对题目中的两个相反的观点做分析,不可以只是分析自己倾向的观点。
2. 考生必须要很清楚的表明自己的观点,等于是回答应当如何对罪犯的犯罪行为定罪。
3. 考生对于题目里两个相反观点的分析要摆出充足的论据,把自己的理由提出同时通过例子来证明。
7.5分考生范文选段:对于固定不变的定罪制度的分析
On the one hand, fixed punishment will have a deterring effect on society.
Individuals knowing that they will be subject to a certain punishment if they are convicted with a given crime will reconsider committing this act in the first place.
This deterring effect also leads to social stability and security, through minimizing the number of crimes committed.
If people knew they would be able to convince the court or the jury of reason for having committed the crime they are accused of,penal decisions would be largely arbitrary.This would result into criminals getting away with their crimes and into a high level of injustice caused by the subjective approach of different courts。
1. 观点:固定的惩罚制度对于社会有威慑力。(fixed punishment will have a deterring effect on society。)
2. 理由:考虑犯罪成本(reconsider committing crimes in the first place)
3. 扩展结果:可以帮助社会稳定(lead to social stability and security through minimizing the number of crimes committed。)
4. 理由:若是没有固定的定罪制度,这样会让犯罪分子更加的猖狂。(If people knew they would be able to convince the court or the jury of reason for having committed the crime they are accused of ,penal decisions would be largely arbitrary。)
5. 扩展结果:犯罪分子逍遥法外,对司法公正没有帮助。(criminals getting away with their crimes and a high level of injustice caused by the subjective approach of different courts。)
(三) 对策
①复习真 题,找生词
题中,经常有核心词汇重复出现,比如:distance learning,criminal等。建议大家可以在复习写作时,先把近两年的写作题目先看一遍,查一查生词。如此做能大大降低考生在作文题里碰到生词的尴尬,提高审题的准确性。
②握不同题型大作文的写作要点
类:可以支持、反对、中立,必须要表达自己的观点。论据还要充分,举例不可或缺。
解决类:所问即所答,关键分析原因,解决方法多角度。
③ 大话题,关键突破
题中有常考的八大话题。
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