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2020-01-13雅思写作一直都是考生们备考的关键,为了方便雅思备考,今天老师整理了2020年雅思大分作文集锦,范文对于初备雅思写作的考生帮助是相当大的,考生们能从范文里理解写作思路,从而逐渐的形成自己的写作风格。
2020年雅思大分作文集锦:
When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive. To
what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
官方给出的大分答案
I disagree with the opinion expressed. I would like to begin by pointing out that "traditional skills and ways of life" are not automatically of one country, but of a culture or community. In many ways, the history of civilization is the history of technology: from the discovery of fire to the invention of the wheel to the development of the Internet, we have been moving on from previous ways of doing things. Some technologies!
Overall, I disagree with the opinion expressed.(首句话里作者直接说出了自己的观点,这有点主要是区别在中国学生通常所使用的背景开头方式,但它在这个开头里同样使用了两个中国学生不大使用的结构,一个是overall,另外一个是过去分词做后置定语,既expressed) I would like to begin by pointing out that "traditional skills and ways of life" are not automatically of one country, but of a culture or community.(作者在此所提出的观点很犀利,并且使用的结构也是相当不错的,大家现在能看看,I would like to do 我想做...,这个结构是中国学生都十分熟悉的,但他随后使用的by doing便比较的标新立异,后面他又使用了一个宾语从句,如此的结构显得更加丰满。并且作者对于标点符号的使用也是很具有特色的,其中的符号确实起到了加强的作用,大家后面需要注意对于标点符号的使用。而其中的连词but虽然不是很难,但使用却相当的好。
Modern buildings are appearing in large numbers but some people believe that we should build our buildings in traditional styles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In recent years, an interesting trend has emerged. Countries with long histories and rich cultures have been modernizing the quickest, especially in terms of architecture. Many have criticized this as not respecting traditional culture. While traditional architecture should be protected, I feel it is not necessary to stop building modern structures as we move forward.
One reason for this is that modern buildings are more practical and comfortable to live and work in. While traditional buildings might look nice from the outside, they are often not very user-friendly. Modern buildings usually have lots of windows and light and are clean and energy efficient. Surely this will make those inside them happier.
Another point to consider is that modern buildings will give a good impression to those visiting from abroad. Consider Beijing during the Olympics if we don’t continue to explore new building styles we won’t be able to let future generations know what our period of history was like.
Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment;
an increasing number of people are concerned about environmental protection and regard it as one of the most important challenges. However, whether only governments and big firms have resources and powers to preserve our environment is a controversial issue. My view is that every single citizen could also make a huge difference.,local authorities and organizations must shoulder their responsibility to develop low-carbon economy at the macro level. Only by doing so can we assure that we could hand this beautiful planet to our next generation and the next generation after.
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