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2019-09-15中国人所写的雅思作文有结构但是却语言不够地道;,而外国人写的文章十分地道,但却又不符合雅思的标准,所以市面上总找不到好的雅思例文。如今老师要为大家收集整理的是2019年雅思作文范文分析。
2019年雅思作文范文分析一:
Children who grow up in families which are short
of money are better prepared to deal with the problems of adult life than children who are brought up by wealthy parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some feel that the children of low income families are better equipped to deal with difficulties posed by the‘real world’when they grow up and they also believe the privileged children of wealthy families are less fit to deal with these difficulties . The implications and veracity of this argument seem self-evident, but in fact require closer examination.
点评:1+ 1 模式,即后面一句是主题句。在本篇雅思作文范文的这一段中的主题句稍微有一些特殊,它真的否定了前面所提及的到的观点,从而表达出了自己的观点,另外还引出了下文。尤其是后半句,感觉是在抛砖引玉。
2019年雅思作文范文分析二:
The popular wisdom is that children of poorer families learn early on the value of a buck, and are thus naturally better suited to stretching money when times get tough in adulthood. Inversely, the children of wealthy families, thoseborn with a silver spoon in their mouths, are believed to be completely ignorant of the value of money, having had everything provided for them in their youth and oftentimes erroneously expecting the same situation in adulthood. They are believed to be prone to overspending and financial irresponsibility. This belief, though logical, overlooks one key point which is , of course, education.
点评: 1 +3 模式,开始一句是主题句。从本篇雅思作文范文的这一段的内容能够看出,这是个让步段(相当于是分析自己并不赞成的观点)。尽管4段论的作文的主体段都是两面讨论,但本人依然是喜欢这样的写作,相当于是主体段的观点还是有关键性的,将让步段放在前面,后面一句话引出下一段,这样过渡很自然,而且自己的观点也比较明确。
以上是老师为大家收集整理的2019年雅思作文范文分析,希望文章里的这些信息考生们能认真的阅读,如果是想再了解其它方面的信息,请点击咨询上海环球教育官方网站。咨询电话:400-820-0602。