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盘点雅思写作低分开头，看看你中枪没有？

环球教育

2018-09-08

有些考生在看到自己的写作成绩后，感觉很疑惑，写作时明明用了很多雅思范文上的高句子，为何分数还这么低呢？是什么阻挡了写作呢？环球教育这就为大盘点了常见的雅思写作低分开头，看看你中枪没有？

一、中式英语

中式英语一直是我们从小到大学习英语的大忌讳。而在雅思写作中，用中式英文开头，不会让考官看不懂，还暴露了你的语言功底。

比如：

写作主题

The happiest moment in your life

案例：In our life,there are always some moments which make your heart flower opened angrily……

二、乱用俗语

讨厌指数：5颗星

考官对中俗语并不“感冒”，胡乱翻译使用中俗语，反而会引起考官反感。

比如：

写作主题

Is it good to have a large family?

案例：I think it is good to have a large family.Because we Chinese believe a sentence:“Many sons,many lucks”……

三、过度复杂

复杂句的叠加并不能增加考官对你的好感。因此开篇只需点明主题，字数过多，表达不清，考官自然认为你的观点模糊，甚至不会表达。

比如：

写作主题

Should college students be allowed to get married?

案例：This topic is very interesting.I’m very interested in talking about this topic.Because I’m also a college student and I’m not married……

四、偏离主题

文不对题自然会扣分，给考官留下的印象就是跑题，想想整体写作分数还会高么？

比如：

写作主题

It is said that nowadays one can‘t acquire the qualifications and quality essential to success through university education.To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

案例：　　　　I think to success,we must have a lot of important qualities.To have these important qualities,we must learn a lot of things,for example,English,music tools,and etc.We can learn these qualities from our teachers,our friends and from books.All in all,we can learn from many places.

五、观点不明朗

雅思大作文很重要的一点就是你的逻辑性和观点，如果观点都不明确，后面的举例证明等都会缺乏说服力，自然分数也不会高。

比如：

写作主题

Should college students be allowed to get married?

案例：I think this topic is very hard to say.Because I am still very little,only 17,and not married,so this topic is very difficult for me……

以上就是环球教育为同学们盘点的雅思写作低分开头，学习拯救下你的雅思写作吧！还有一点要提醒同学们的是，在参考雅思范文时，切记生搬硬套，应灵活运用才是道。欲知更多雅思资讯，请大在线咨询上海环球教育网，或者是拨打免费电话400-820-0602进行咨询。

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